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When the seasons change their flow to a spin,
When the links start to wear, slowly within,
Please, don't ever let those ties begin to tear,
Or lose them to the wind.

Weighed down by the words I could not let myself forget,
They would fill me with deep regret, when
I began to drift peacefully through a soothing fantasy,
Then awoke to discover you had disappeared.

Tying up the appearance I wanted to embrace,
Softly scattering colors of orange without a trace,
Carving pain through my heart which was now an empty space, it's

Fluttering, Fluttering, Fluttering,

To the sky, to the sea or to someplace far away,
I'd try, to deliver a lasting bond that time couldn't fray,
But instead, all the colors of the ties that we have made, are

Fluttering and Fluttering away.

Memories once bright, flicker as they begin to age,
With time, they are lost on a long forgotten page,
They will sleep, in the heart like a dark and empty cage, still

Fluttering, Fluttering, Fluttering,

Yet I wish I could share my heart with you once again,
So now I'll try sending the remnants of those ties if I can,
But like rain, gently falling down to earth on the wind, they're

Fluttering and Fluttering away.
Please seek my consent before using these lyrics in any way. If used for display, credit me and provide a link to the original, found here: [link]

Picture is not mine* That said, I have no idea who the heck it belongs to...


*I now have a video for these translyrics: [link]

So I only discovered the wonder of vocaloids about a week ago, and as soon as I found this song, unknown forces compelled me to make an English version. Took me about four days, not bad I'd say; it fits the original singing almost perfectly, because I'm picky like that ^^

Anyways as one of the first things I ever post here, I'm pretty proud of it.

Enjoy~
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BlueLakeKylie Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm thinking about using these, may I?
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PinkieSlender Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015
:SAD MIKU:
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xiueol Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
i used these for a cover! i credited you and here it is if you needed the link ;U; 

soundcloud.com/xiueoli/hirari-…
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Xeito Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hello,I really love your lyrics and I was wondering,may I use these lyrics for a cover with a new UTAU I'm making? I will credit.
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WhiteFatalis1 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014
I really love these lyrics and i would like to use this in the Vocaloid 3 for the english vocaloids. Is that okay?
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juliaisawesomeee Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So, I just stumbled across these lyrics today, and I absolutely love them (and a bunch of your other lyrics too)! \^o^/ Would you mind if I used them for a cover?
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PrinceTetsuo Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
.......Why does anyone have to credit you? You just translated rofl.
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savantsean Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Well, this is 9 months late, but I'll answer anyways. I didn't translate anything; I found an existing English translation and created a version that could be sung to the same rhythm as the original. That's all that I take credit for, just like fan-fiction writers don't take credit for characters/universes they borrow, only the story they put them into.
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LilChic-San Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Because, despite the fact that it's a translation, perhaps they put their soul into it to make it go along with the tempo??? I'm not sure how to explain it really, plus I mean it took four days.
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PrinceTetsuo Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm sorry, but they didn't write the song.
It's a very stupid way to look at it.
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:iconlilchic-san:
LilChic-San Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I know they're not the OA but actually try translating a song to English making the lyrics fit the beat perfectly
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MuffysArt Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm sorry, but it's a translyrics. Did you ever try doing a translyrics for a song? I guess not, otherwise you wouldn't say something like this is stupid.
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PrinceTetsuo Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ROFL OKAY.
RIGHT.
you get magical copyrights to a song because you took the time to translate it you're such a martyr
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MuffysArt Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Go google what a translyrics is. It's not just a translation.
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PrinceTetsuo Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm sorry but I can't take it seriously and i never will.
It's just a translation, that's all it is.
Oh you had to sub in some words because there's not always a proper translation, congrats.
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dojan5 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014
The fact that you think it's a translation speaks tons of the skill of the writer; it's not a translation.
It's a transliteration that fits the original song perfectly, syllable for syllable, and that's mighty difficult to accomplish.
If you actually end up using his lyrics, the least you can do is mention that he is the one who wrote them.
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FalconAt Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
This is an artful translation. Rarely do I see a translation that fits the original syllable for syllable. I don'y know how accurate it is as I know nothing of japanese, but this is a very marketable english version. 
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Chihiko666 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013
So good ;w; Too bad I can't sing for shizz or I'd cover it X'D
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Ingathol Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hey I love your lyrics, would I be able to use them in teh musical episode for my show?

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MayumiSasaki Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I used it for a cover! :D

And I credited you! :)

www.youtube.com/watch?v=OsjdwY…

Thanks so much!!
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AGLtaria Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I love songs that have English translations that you can sing along with!
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KillaArtiztsOnCrack Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
This is sooo pretty! i love how the words express their meaning in the song and your way of writing the lyrics.
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sogsaveourgreys Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Please may I cover this song with your lyrics? They're beautiful. I will, of course, credit you.
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savantsean Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Please do ^^
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ENZERUbebiTAKKUN Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
*le gasp*

Guess who made a cover savant-san!!!! :D
THIS GUUUURRRLL

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wanna looky? [link]

I credited you a WHOOOOOOLE bunchies :iconcblushplz:
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savantsean Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Watched it, I really like it. Too bad you didn't do the whole song though!
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ENZERUbebiTAKKUN Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Tehe! Thanks!!! :D

Honestly I didn't practice the ending enough so i was like 

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and didn't do it xDDDD
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ENZERUbebiTAKKUN Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
I sentchu a note requesting to use your super fantabulous lyrics but I'll comment too, just in case.
May I please use your lyrics in my fanime? I will credit you while the song is being sung during the show, as well as, in the credits at the end of the episode it was used.

thanks so much!

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savantsean Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Replied to your note, so I'll just leave a "yes" here, haha.
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ENZERUbebiTAKKUN Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
:iconcreepystareplz:

:iconpewdiederpplz: LOLZ

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Kagaku-Sama Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Can i use you lyrics for a fandub? Yes? n.n
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savantsean Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Feel free ^^ Good luck!
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Kagaku-Sama Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Mymy, Thank you!
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AmiForte Featured By Owner May 26, 2013
Nice job! I just listened to this song and I was curious as to what it was about. I knew it wasn't happy. >.< Anyway, thanks and good job!
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Nightshade-Kitsune Featured By Owner May 18, 2013
Someday, I'll be able to write translyrics as beautiful as these. Someday...! q__q
Who am I kidding? That won't happen. But fantastic job! I really love these. <3
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YueKyo Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist
I am so sorry for the double post, my computer lagged so much that day and I couldn't see that I had posted twice ;A;
Sorry ;(
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savantsean Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's ok; Sorry, I haven't checked this site in awhile so I'm just replying now. Please feel free to do a cover :)
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YueKyo Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist
Hi I just wonder if I could do an cover of Hirari Hirari with your lyrics?
If I could I would be really happy and ofc I would give all the credits to you.
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YueKyo Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist
Hello, I sang these lyrics to Hirari Hirari and I am thinking of doing a cover and I wonder if I can use your lyrics?? Ofc I am going to give you credits to them, I could even give you the link to the finished product if you want to,^^ when I have made the cover that is. XD
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sogsaveourgreys Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is quite honestly one of the most beautiful English version of Hirari I have ever read. Hirari is my favourite Vocaloid song and you have written it in English so beautifully! Thank you for making this version, I finally have something to show my friends to help them understand how beautiful Vocaloid music is!
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crazy4christj Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
This is so pretty :*D
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VerticalForklift Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013   Digital Artist
This is definitely worth being proud of. uvu And not almost exactly; exactly! I've been singing your trans-lyrics along with the original Japanese and they fit so perfectly! \ >w< / At some point I'd like to record myself, but I don't know how right now... lD If I ever do, I'll be sure to get your permission before posting it! ovo d
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Dawn1994 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
Just love your version, you have a very good litterary level
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DanishRambling Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Could I use these lyrics for a homestuck fan video I'm making?
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savantsean Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry for the slow reply, sure feel free to use them~
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DanishRambling Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
okay, thank you very much :D
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Wrathfulqueen Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
My friend and I are going to be trying to cosplay Gumi and Yuma and want to sing songs while we're in costume...would you mind if we sang your version of Hirari?
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savantsean Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sure you can, that's awesome! :D Have fun!
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Wrathfulqueen Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
Thank you very much! We won't be doing it anytime soon because we are both college students and I'm looking for employment but when we do, I'll try to get a video to show you :D
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ChibitaliaxHRE Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013
T^T So Beautiful! I was listening to the song and reading along, and I loved it! My teacher was very confused as to why I looked like I was about to hug my computer.
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