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When the seasons change their flow to a spin,
When the links start to wear, slowly within,
Please, don't ever let those ties begin to tear,
Or lose them to the wind.

Weighed down by the words I could not let myself forget,
They would fill me with deep regret, when
I began to drift peacefully through a soothing fantasy,
Then awoke to discover you had disappeared.

Tying up the appearance I wanted to embrace,
Softly scattering colors of orange without a trace,
Carving pain through my heart which was now an empty space, it's

Fluttering, Fluttering, Fluttering,

To the sky, to the sea or to someplace far away,
I'd try, to deliver a lasting bond that time couldn't fray,
But instead, all the colors of the ties that we have made, are

Fluttering and Fluttering away.

Memories once bright, flicker as they begin to age,
With time, they are lost on a long forgotten page,
They will sleep, in the heart like a dark and empty cage, still

Fluttering, Fluttering, Fluttering,

Yet I wish I could share my heart with you once again,
So now I'll try sending the remnants of those ties if I can,
But like rain, gently falling down to earth on the wind, they're

Fluttering and Fluttering away.
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Please seek my consent before using these lyrics in any way. If used for display, credit me and provide a link to the original, found here: [link]

Picture is not mine* That said, I have no idea who the heck it belongs to...


*I now have a video for these translyrics: [link]

So I only discovered the wonder of vocaloids about a week ago, and as soon as I found this song, unknown forces compelled me to make an English version. Took me about four days, not bad I'd say; it fits the original singing almost perfectly, because I'm picky like that ^^

Anyways as one of the first things I ever post here, I'm pretty proud of it.

Enjoy~
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Someday, I'll be able to write translyrics as beautiful as these. Someday...! q__q
Who am I kidding? That won't happen. But fantastic job! I really love these. <3
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~YueKyo May 10, 2013  Hobbyist
I am so sorry for the double post, my computer lagged so much that day and I couldn't see that I had posted twice ;A;
Sorry ;(
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~savantsean May 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's ok; Sorry, I haven't checked this site in awhile so I'm just replying now. Please feel free to do a cover :)
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Mood: Love ~YueKyo May 8, 2013  Hobbyist
Hi I just wonder if I could do an cover of Hirari Hirari with your lyrics?
If I could I would be really happy and ofc I would give all the credits to you.
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~YueKyo May 7, 2013  Hobbyist
Hello, I sang these lyrics to Hirari Hirari and I am thinking of doing a cover and I wonder if I can use your lyrics?? Ofc I am going to give you credits to them, I could even give you the link to the finished product if you want to,^^ when I have made the cover that is. XD
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~sogsaveourgreys May 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is quite honestly one of the most beautiful English version of Hirari I have ever read. Hirari is my favourite Vocaloid song and you have written it in English so beautifully! Thank you for making this version, I finally have something to show my friends to help them understand how beautiful Vocaloid music is!
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~crazy4christj Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
This is so pretty :*D
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~VerticalForklift Mar 13, 2013   Digital Artist
This is definitely worth being proud of. uvu And not almost exactly; exactly! I've been singing your trans-lyrics along with the original Japanese and they fit so perfectly! \ >w< / At some point I'd like to record myself, but I don't know how right now... lD If I ever do, I'll be sure to get your permission before posting it! ovo d
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:icondawn1994:
Just love your version, you have a very good litterary level
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~DanishRambling Feb 23, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Could I use these lyrics for a homestuck fan video I'm making?
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